In the article, “Is Music a Good Tool
for Health?,” the author, Elizabeth Scott, writes how music affects our bodies
and minds. Scott reports that music therapy has been expanding its use in
medical field because it positively affects for easing symptoms of patients in
many ways. The author also reports that strong beat of music can stimulate our
brainwaves, which means strong beat helps to create shaper concentration, and
slower beats helps people calm and relax. Music also can bring slower breathing
and slower heart rate to people. Music profoundly affects our bodies and minds.
I agree with the author’s idea that “music affects the body and mind in many
powerful ways.”
Strong beat provides me sharp
concentration, but it also boosts my body’s energy in a gym. I usually run an
hour with listening music in the gym. It is my routine; however, if I run
without music, I cannot run even 30 minutes. When I listen to strong beat
music, my mind is more concentrate on running and my energy goes up. It feels
like I could run limitless. Listening
strong beat music boosts my energy to run long distance. Music has a great
effect on our brains and makes us more energetic.
Aroma therapy is used for meditation
or releasing people’s stress, and music therapy is also used for making people
relaxed. As the author mentions that music
can bring slower breathing and heart rate, most massage salons in spas uses combination
of aroma therapy and music therapy for releasing customer’s chronic stress. They
use the sound of a murmuring of a stream or slower music to synchronize customer’s
heart rate and make them relaxed. Music therapy has a power to calm and relaxed
people, so people can heal and release their stress.
Music is great tool for making people
more energetic and healing their mind. This is why music has been growing its
use for medical field. Music is great natural medication without side effects.
A good revision--introduction with the main ideas, and two paragraphs each developing a different point supporting the thesis
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